Alright
I'll give ya a review, and some advice.
The sound balancing was good, maybe a little less drums. They seemed to be too overpowering to the actual melody. It got a bit boring towards the middle, so you might wanna mix it up a bit more next time.
Add some different instruments, or combine a few instruments to make some new sounds, that's what music is all about anyway.
And as for getting reviews. You do not need to spam it on your description. Best way that I could see to get reviews, is to review as many songs as possible. That way, other people appreciate what you are doing and hopefully return the favor. If they don't, oh well. You got a lot more than one person seeing the review you posted anyway.
So keep that in mind, and keep making music!
overall - repetitious, add some more sounds